Thursday, November 12, 2015

Promise Me To Love After End Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

My time,
your time,
both are mortal,
so,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Amitava Sur 15 November 2015

Very affirmatively you have expressed and emphasized on the firmness of LOVE which is ever glowing and what exists timelessly. Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

so strong it should last forever thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Time of life and love both are mortal as per specificity of living in this material world. This is a very deeply drafted thought provoking poem shared. Promising love is always good in sharing...10

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Kelly Kurt 13 November 2015

Love is a powerful force. The earth needs more of it. Thanks, Akhtar And thanks for the notes too

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Valsa George 12 November 2015

God created love, the noble metal, that doesn't dissolve in acids of hate, Love these lines.....! Yes, true love is immortal and extends beyond time! A great write!

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Rajnish Manga 12 November 2015

Hats off to you, Sir. You have taken an inter-disciplinary approach to define what love is in terms of time or in terms of life or after-life, promises apart. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful poem. God created love, the noble metal, that doesn't dissolve in acids of hate,

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