Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Promise Me....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before the slumbering sun woke up
And before the dawn breaks up
Confess to me that the night we spent together
Indeed, Left indelible mark to cherish forever.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deepak S S 22 July 2020

Romantic poem beautifully written.

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M Asim Nehal 15 October 2015

Thanks to everyone for lovely comments and Valuable vote......

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T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

This poem soothes the lover's mind and poetically takes him to a wonderland...enjoyable poem.10

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Rajnish Manga 14 October 2015

It is the presence of mutual love between two lovers, between man and man that does not remain confined to themselves but goes on to flourish in all directions to give a healing touch to the bruised humanity. Let's take a look: And the music we discovered / you shall unleash to this world / you shall sing those sorrowful tunes of suffering souls / and will inspire me to talk again.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

This a gentle and poetical write, streaming smoothly throughout the poem with romance and beauty of a heart in love...a really tender write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

slumbering sun wakes up....the dawn breaks up...what an amazing imagery is drawn here definitely. Very interesting sharing...10

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Loke Kok Yee 14 October 2015

Spoken like a true lover!

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