Promise Me Comments
"Leave me alone." All right I leave, it's everyday strife,
Living with you for years though I am not your wife.
Promise not to remember seeing a few broken hairs on the pillows
And if you remembered me you'll find me on the windows.
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It is a wonder that two people can bear to marry each other... bury, yes.... bear with each other, not very happily! ! !
The poem is a fine word-picture of unmarried couples who always quarrel and argue, quite a nuisance to each other...the scene is a bit comical, and it surely makes a good story...Thanks for sharing. Perdita
You have dealt with a serious issue with a sprinkle of humor! Enjoyed this monologue involving a man and a woman!
A vivid portrayal of common law relationships. Very clever write. I laughed most of the time while reading this fascinating poem.10
A very insightful piece of work! Appreciated it! Thanks dear sir for sharing!
A true picture of a society where men and women live together without marriage.
Ha ha ha, enjoyed a lot! A true picture has been depicted in the poem. well done!
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7/26/2025 4:48:01 PM # 1.0.0
live with me enjoy me but don't ask to marry me I love variety as much as you do come live in with me what else will you do but try to find another gal you may not like to compare nor love come and live in we will share all burden equally