Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Promise Me Comments

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Promise Me you'll always be with me forever,
Promise Me you'll be beside me when I cry,
Promise Me you'll call me beautiful,
Promise Me you'll defy gravity with me,
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Romeo Della Valle 29 December 2009

Wow, It won't be easy, but it can be done if both parties honestly agree to, wish luck, I have been to reach that goal for the longest, well penned piece,10+++(Please, if you have some times, read some of my poems) Love and Peace, Romeo

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

though the first word of each line is the same but it still has its beauty.

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