Thursday, March 6, 2008

Promise Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

Promise me you will be here
Promise that you’ll find the way home
That you will not forget where we walked
Promise that you’ll wait for me
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nick trager
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Rommel Filoteo 10 March 2008

Wonderful penning. A very lovely poem..........

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Brittney Phillips 08 March 2008

I promise you i love this poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 March 2008

hi nick..........this is the beginning of a good work.........well done pal.........

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 08 March 2008

I like 'Promise Me' Especially these lines: Promise me well walk together Promise that we can have fun again Promise me you’ll still act the same Very nice, Nick. Very good, indeed.

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Don Mcwilliams 08 March 2008

This is very nice, Nick. I particularly like the last three lines. There is an undercurrent of sadness there, hinted at but not expressed too plainly, so that the lines maintain their strength. Keep writing. Don

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 06 March 2008

this sound like somthing i would read to my gradfather cause hes forgetting a lot of stuff that happend in this life thanks fot sharing this great poem

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