Promise Me Comments

Wonderful penning. A very lovely poem..........

I promise you i love this poem

hi nick..........this is the beginning of a good work.........well done pal.........

I like 'Promise Me' Especially these lines: Promise me well walk together Promise that we can have fun again Promise me you’ll still act the same Very nice, Nick. Very good, indeed.

This is very nice, Nick. I particularly like the last three lines. There is an undercurrent of sadness there, hinted at but not expressed too plainly, so that the lines maintain their strength. Keep writing. Don

this sound like somthing i would read to my gradfather cause hes forgetting a lot of stuff that happend in this life thanks fot sharing this great poem