Promise Comments
Ceiling so high
Walls so wide apart
Treading along this path
with a gasping heart
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youre very good with your rhyme and rhythym...excellent indeed...wistful sweet and a hide and seek with hope and despair.
This one's probably my favorite of all your poems.Great imagery, we can really feel the emotions w/ your explicit descriptions.Keep writing, good luck.
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7/21/2025 9:36:14 AM # 1.0.0
intensely penned....great work...