Promise Comments

Promise me to be here When I shed tear For Your loving songs........ It is so lovely... beautifully penned down poem.. Rgs Rema

promise...thrice...will be fullfilled...poem short and impressive

Touching and heart warming, to be needed is to be loved,10 again, Lynda xx

Beautiful, very touching Hun!

Touching and Warm Lovely Thx for sharing ^_^

Great, Nice poem persian! ! ! keep it up and keep it coming! ! ! ! bye love from EM OXOXX

A promise sought that means - a lot! Very touching, a pleasure to read this poem! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad

Nicely penned Persian my friend......keep'm coming '10

I loved this one. It's simple, but heartfelt. I only think you could add an 'a' to the second verse, so it would be 'When I shed a tear'. Just a suggestion, though. Very nice work.

simple and beautiful

Simply put but very evocative. Music, the Beloved, and Nature have all been included beautifully. Thanks, Nightingale.