Thursday, May 8, 2008

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My heart pants.
I can't breathe.
I feel you..in the gentle breeze.
This reminds me to remain very still
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Rayniece D. Clayborne
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Brianna Olivieri 08 May 2008

I very much enjoye reading your poem. What were you thinking about when you wrote this?

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