Saturday, December 2, 2017

Promise Comments

Rating: 4.7

I love your smile because it lightens up my world,
I love your eyes because of the love they hold,
I love your nose because that's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen,
I love your lips because they take me where no one has ever been,
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Jasmeen Kaur
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Nice. A fitting ode to eternal love.

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Desi Boy 15 December 2017

wonderfull dear I really like ur lines. plzzz send ur lyrics (rap) me in inbox I am trying to rap ur lyrics.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Jasmeee K. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

Thank you very much for appreciating.

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pooja 03 December 2017

amazing babe ,,, heart touching

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thanku girl

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Rishi 03 December 2017

way to go girl... :

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thank you :)

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2017

Welcome to this august Forum, Jasmeen. And mow a word about this poem. You have nicely captured the sensuous and the emotional aspects of a relationship in love. Thanks for sharing this poem. I quote: But most of all.... I love your soul for it's the purest of all. Defeated I sit, but now with a grin, For no one can defeat the fire within.

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thank you very much for your kind words. I tried my best to put into words what was going on in my heart.

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

Beautiful passionate piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Jasmeen.

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

Thank you, i am glad you liked it.

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Hj_official 02 December 2017

Really good one... Love it

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Hj_official 02 December 2017

A really good one.... Love it

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Pallavi 02 December 2017

Great job... You go girl...

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