I love your smile because it lightens up my world,
I love your eyes because of the love they hold,
I love your nose because that's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen,
I love your lips because they take me where no one has ever been,
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wonderfull dear I really like ur lines. plzzz send ur lyrics (rap) me in inbox I am trying to rap ur lyrics.
A great start with a nice poem, Jasmeee K. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Welcome to this august Forum, Jasmeen. And mow a word about this poem. You have nicely captured the sensuous and the emotional aspects of a relationship in love. Thanks for sharing this poem. I quote: But most of all.... I love your soul for it's the purest of all. Defeated I sit, but now with a grin, For no one can defeat the fire within.
thank you very much for your kind words. I tried my best to put into words what was going on in my heart.
Beautiful passionate piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Jasmeen.
Nice. A fitting ode to eternal love.