Sunday, March 18, 2012

Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes flutter
(Frightened flocks
Of birds in flight)
Your pursed mouth;
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Barry Blander
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Ramesh Rai 23 April 2012

I agree with frnd Romeo. About your composition, i feel myself little to comment. I like - If I could capture your sorrow, Your quicksilver smile In a glittering moment Of evanescent time

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Valerie Dohren 07 April 2012

Wonderful - agree with Romeo Della Valle who has said it all. Well done.

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Romeo Della Valle 31 March 2012

Wow! What an impressive and well crafted write that really moved me! I love it! A reservoir of beautiful penning words and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up1 I Promise I will read some more of your thought provoking works I Promise God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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