Sunday, October 10, 2010

Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

I clasped it tightly until veins turned blue.
Solitary warmth, I know
Would not suffice
This hand is as cold as ice.
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Ahyela Andojar
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Romeo Della Valle 10 October 2010

An excellent and well penned write! Keep it up! 10+++Love and Peace...

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