Sunday, May 18, 2008

Prom Queen Comments

Rating: 5.0

She shows up, her look is a jewel,
she attracts attention, she makes the guys drool.

But the other girls, are blinded by rage,
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XxAmieLee xX
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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2008

A lovely 'happily ever after' story that lifts the heart. I wonder who she is? I'm sure she's someone you know. Perhaps someone you've seen in the mirror. I hope so. Like the way you've structured your poem The couplets work really well. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 May 2008

yet a lovely poem by the heart soul when revels inthe gleams of love......................beautiful imagery of love looking luscious green, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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