Monday, January 18, 2010

Prom! $e Of Love Comments

Rating: 3.0

It's so hard to believe that he's gone,
everything seems a blur, so wrong.
You sit there and stare at your ring,
this couldn't be happening, not him.
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tanvi damle
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Braja K Sarkar 05 December 2011

Full of sweet thoughts of love.nicely expressed in this poem..I think only a true lover can tell this way..Thanks Tanvi...

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Shekhar Joshi 23 January 2010

beautifully written....this was ur best for me till now.......maybe coz i have written something close to it...... liked it anyways............... ;) hey y dont u look up at mine(the similar themed one) ......namely 'forever remains......'

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Darlene Styles 22 January 2010

very deep. i like it

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anurag duggal 22 January 2010

we should not obsess about whats gone....life is to live not brood so live it gal

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i like this poem, good job :) ! ! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 21 January 2010

Words have a real togetherness.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 19 January 2010

A lovely love poem from a teen aged.

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dance angel 19 January 2010

this is so great very good indeed

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Tom Golding 19 January 2010

Emotive and touching. Watch the tenses and grammer though when rhyming the end of a line.

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Fay Slimm 19 January 2010

An emotive sharing of loss - - and with a tender undercurrent you have succeeded in appeal to the reader.... well written. 10 from Fay.

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Aira Olayvar 18 January 2010

While reading the poem I can feel the emotions of losing someone… the emotions itself is present, which makes it good… but to where is he has no exact clue… though if I were to conclude your man has already went to his resting place though the memories remains. If my conclusion is somehow true… just get back on me… tell me how ok? Only if you don’t mind.

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Luke Easter 18 January 2010

Where has he gone? How did he go? This is incomplete.

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David Mountain 18 January 2010

Touching emotion which are part of lifes experience. David M.

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Tanay Pathak 18 January 2010

People who loose, are the only people who understand........If you remove all the HE's and add SHE's then this is the same as me, seriously...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 January 2010

quite passionate, eloquently evocative as love when intense, well penned, keep on writing by your poetic surge,10+, thanks for sharing

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Ameur Amer 18 January 2010

Wonderful sense and very beautiful words, has a deep meaning in our lives..keep wiriting my friend.

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C. P. Sharma 18 January 2010

There is poetic justice in this poem. CP

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Chitra - 18 January 2010

Rich in emotion. The ups and downs of love. well written!

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Kesav Easwaran 18 January 2010

That's love and its game plan...we never know how it turns out in the end...good write Tanvi...sentiments pouring in there...10

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