It's so hard to believe that he's gone,
everything seems a blur, so wrong.
You sit there and stare at your ring,
this couldn't be happening, not him.
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beautifully written....this was ur best for me till now.......maybe coz i have written something close to it...... liked it anyways............... ;) hey y dont u look up at mine(the similar themed one) ......namely 'forever remains......'
we should not obsess about whats gone....life is to live not brood so live it gal
i like this poem, good job :) ! ! ! !
Emotive and touching. Watch the tenses and grammer though when rhyming the end of a line.
An emotive sharing of loss - - and with a tender undercurrent you have succeeded in appeal to the reader.... well written. 10 from Fay.
While reading the poem I can feel the emotions of losing someone… the emotions itself is present, which makes it good… but to where is he has no exact clue… though if I were to conclude your man has already went to his resting place though the memories remains. If my conclusion is somehow true… just get back on me… tell me how ok? Only if you don’t mind.
Touching emotion which are part of lifes experience. David M.
People who loose, are the only people who understand........If you remove all the HE's and add SHE's then this is the same as me, seriously...
quite passionate, eloquently evocative as love when intense, well penned, keep on writing by your poetic surge,10+, thanks for sharing
Wonderful sense and very beautiful words, has a deep meaning in our lives..keep wiriting my friend.
That's love and its game plan...we never know how it turns out in the end...good write Tanvi...sentiments pouring in there...10
Full of sweet thoughts of love.nicely expressed in this poem..I think only a true lover can tell this way..Thanks Tanvi...