Friday, March 17, 2017

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From fake people to virtual friends,
Ugly fights with trolling replaced
The recluse circumscribed in video games.
Editing photos as we painted face,
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Payal Priya
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Siddartha Montik 28 March 2017

Almost sounding like sarcastic philosophy. Yes we are making a Great Progress on a Circular Path! . the starting Point yet, food.. that Come only from Nature.! Thanks for sharing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2017

On a circular land! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Payal Priya 23 March 2017

Thanks Robert your comments are full of positivity giving me an impetus to write more and express better.

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Payal Priya 23 March 2017

Thank you Rajnish glad that you liked it.

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Rajnish Manga 23 March 2017

To some extent, all users of social media share the views expressed by the poet. The virtual world has replaced genuine feelings and concerns for one another with superfluousness. A complex situation expressed with commendable ease. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Friendship, feeling, conversations All feigned.

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