Monday, November 3, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

Tenebrous night was on
Still the sense reminds something
Next dawn will wipe out shadows
It's the pursue of time on chart
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SALINI NAIR
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 November 2014

Beam of light take to the mighty scene Highs and lows appraise nature's boon Land and water correlate themselves Apprehension that balance itself nice write thank you

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Kee Thampi 04 November 2014

a philosophy not a monitor love of life beyond a.... Life that resonate a rule implicit Life a balance sheet tally itself Parity that decide its waves Karma and dharma its tool invisible! ! !

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 November 2014

Karma and dharma prepare balance sheet of life.......so sweetly composed...top marks

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2014

Being an ex-Accountant I enjoyed this poem as a well prepared balance sheet of life and as an Auditor I pass this Account without any qualification. A lovely poem...............10

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Saheb Mohapatra 03 November 2014

began the poem in a tremendous way and ended it very nicely.......good piece of work thanks

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