Proclamation Without Pretension Comments

Makes perfect sense written by a great Read Tristan

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I would call this 'Proclamation without Pretension or Poetry.' I hate to sound like LP, but there is really no sound to this, and it's very didactic. There's no attachment to show who translated this so it can only be judged as a translation, and in my book, that is always judged as a second poem and a collaboration between poet and translator. The lines I liked best were: 'UNIQUE we are a seal of NOTHING We affirm the VITALITY of every IN- STANT' .SAS.

i am mixed up amoung the crowd again on this one, the sky has just stepped on my toes from a star

this i like...........