Problems In Life Poem by mamutty CHOLA

Problems In Life

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PROBLEMS IN LIFE

Oh bar man don't become saint
I have come to bar to have peace

If I have found mental peace
in temple and mosque then
Why shouldI come to bar

Today my heart is very sad
Asked my patience reason for
sadness

Said my heart heardsad voice
from across thehorizon

What to talk of care of loved ones
Love sincesome time

All are saying they are either
Hindu, Muslim or Christian only
,
That was promiseof her coming
During spring season

She never came but camea blank letter
Which conveyedher state of helplessness

Monday, December 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lyric
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 21 December 2020

Oh bar man don't become saint I have come to bar to have peace......oh the problem is saintship..... All are saying they are either Hindu, Muslim or Christian only...sikh are also there... Do a tug of war between atheist and a priest... topic some difficult but as per my mathematical calculation every sum has a solutions within itself. Good write.

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