Friday, June 14, 2019

Problems And Pebbles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah pebble, just a pebble,
Pray spare such derision,
It can hold enough treason.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 June 2019

A pebble can cause you to tumble, A growing problem would not crumble, Split it into handy division....brilliant expression sir! Thoroughly enjoyed the poem..............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 June 2019

Thank you dear poet for your appreciation that goes a long way.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

A problem's like a pebble, And to see so if able, Solve it; let it simmer, nor season.....outstanding conceptualization. It is really a beautiful poem on problem and pebble. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Yes, a problem is often neglected like a pebble in the path. Thank you for appreciating it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2019

A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. So beautifully written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thank you indeed dear poet.

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Bharati Nayak 14 June 2019

Ah pebble, just a pebble, Pray spare such derision, It can hold enough treason. If you hold it high and nigh And close to your seeing eye, It blocks your entire vision. - - - - - -A nice metaphor for problems of life.I too have written a poem on 'Pebble', but it is from a different context.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thank you dear poet for the feedback. I'll certainly read your 'Pebble' and revert.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2019

Problems of love and life! ! Living on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thanks for reading and commenting, Edward Louis.

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