Problem Sharing Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

Problem Sharing

Rating: 5.0


A problem....
may be personal
puts pressure on the mind
with each passing day
continues to scare
with its stranglehold
it invites
multiple partners
corroborating each other
mind contaminated
as if life means only that problem
anybody's smile
entertaining gadgets
mouth-watering dish
the rainy sky
or the refulgent moon
fail to get rid
of the deep-rooted problem
like a caged mind
this is the right time
for problem sharing
if shared with a trusted friend
the problem evaporates
like the steam
in a pressure-cooker.

Problem Sharing
Friday, September 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: problem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

Puts pressure on the mind! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 September 2016

Thank you Louis for sharing your feelings with me, thereby doubling my joy...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2016

Problem may be personal or social this gives pressure and a person feels stress. Sometimes cage minded person shares this with friends for release. Very thought provoking and wonderful sharing this poem is...10

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 September 2016

Thank you very much for your nice motivation..

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