My problem is I romanticize
I fantasize, I idealize
When things should be blatant and ugly
Realistic, objectified
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Sonya: the end of your poem reminds me so much of Neruda. Great minds must think alike, eh? The word structure, the rhythm, the rhyming..it is all exquisite. So glad to have met you halfway, mind to mind here! cheers Patti
Gosh this one resonates. Think I suffer from the same condition. It's beautifully creafted and simple yet its message is very effective. Great work Sonya - love it! HG: -) xx