Friday, November 15, 2019

Problem Far Too Deep Comments

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Why honeymooners were short of sleep?
If to an obvious thing you leap,
That would be one-track mind,
There's a reason behind:
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Marriage! ! Facing the problems as well. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

Yes, me, my wife, and mobile. It is a love triangle these days. Thanks for visiting.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 November 2019

honey mooners cannot afford to sleep if for a long time their spouses they want to keep both are marathoners sexually or else find another one subsequently won't help thee don't sleep keep eyes open and see what is like each different hopefully

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

I might revert if I later divine what exactly you mean. In the meanwhile, thank you for visiting.

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Anjandev Roy 15 November 2019

Fine Limerick. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

Thanks for visiting and appreciating dear reader/poet.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 November 2019

A humorous limerick, sir Aniruddha..10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

Yes indeed, humour on happenings of today. Thank you so much appreciating the ditty.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 November 2019

short sleep in honeymoon! o yeah sleeping pill cannot touch the moon! moon lives on so far though near of dream and sight

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

Thanks for visiting this ditty dear MB

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