Saturday, June 24, 2006

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I'm capsizing in my own reality
Can't this world see the potential in me?
My mind overrun by compulsive thoughts
And peace has again evaded being caught
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Jessica Thomas
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Abigail Keller 24 June 2006

This is a great poem, I love your use of ryhme and rythm to create such a piece. ~Amber~

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