Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Prize Rings Comments

Rating: 4.5

I knew our end was near
the day we shopped for rings
I thought we were forever dear
but you were not meant to be
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survi sharma
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Nikhil Sharma 11 September 2013

Thats a very natural one, you can be a very good writer...keep it up..and happy to meet you here

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

what a romantic poem loved it to the core of my heart

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Ankit Sharma 03 August 2013

enchanting music of the soul and a great write

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Good poem of positive energy. For every action has its equal and opposite reaction.no? Positively faing challenges is a good quality. Tense situation easily overcomes.Good content and form.

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~ Jenie~ 26 July 2013

a ring in the prize and a heart winning saga delivered written so well and a great poem

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Anamika Jalan 25 July 2013

heart winning a rare reading masterpiece written once in a huge space of time great reading experience and a heart charming poem

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Ramesh Rai 24 July 2013

you have revealed ur poetic talent only with few poems. maturity over thoughts knocking. poetry is exclusive when u can determine some better. age factor is also here.so keep it up.future is bright.take care of ur study.

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Valsa George 23 July 2013

As dark clouds shift away, prize rings come our way! Rhyming and sweet!

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

memories will return time after time. but we must look to the future. a good read

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2013

Beautiful with great rhythm and flow, we can always move onto better horizons!

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James Mclain 17 July 2013

Survi-Survi-Survi how have you survived withoutwithout the speaking of such a lovely name....iip

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David Wood 17 July 2013

This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and rythem. I like it very much.

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Vishal Sharma 17 July 2013

great one, the nostalgic feeling created is superb plz write more and more

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