I knew our end was near
the day we shopped for rings
I thought we were forever dear
but you were not meant to be
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Good poem of positive energy. For every action has its equal and opposite reaction.no? Positively faing challenges is a good quality. Tense situation easily overcomes.Good content and form.
a ring in the prize and a heart winning saga delivered written so well and a great poem
heart winning a rare reading masterpiece written once in a huge space of time great reading experience and a heart charming poem
you have revealed ur poetic talent only with few poems. maturity over thoughts knocking. poetry is exclusive when u can determine some better. age factor is also here.so keep it up.future is bright.take care of ur study.
As dark clouds shift away, prize rings come our way! Rhyming and sweet!
memories will return time after time. but we must look to the future. a good read
Beautiful with great rhythm and flow, we can always move onto better horizons!
Survi-Survi-Survi how have you survived withoutwithout the speaking of such a lovely name....iip
This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and rythem. I like it very much.
great one, the nostalgic feeling created is superb plz write more and more
Thats a very natural one, you can be a very good writer...keep it up..and happy to meet you here