*** Priyatam *** Comments

Mum, s the word..alpha one of the Greek letters used to guide the planes in the sky and our lives..poignant++++10 regards

Changli! ....

Chaan, pori, chaan..Mala tumcha he poem avadla! [The benefit of staying in Mumbai and schooling in Maharashtra's premier hill station....]. Ankhi liha....[One of my fav writer is Sane Guruji] Cheers. Subroto

I have already started writing it on my walls

too good..this is a suprise..u can write in marathi too thanks 2 ur mom and u dint tell this earlier

plz mat remove karwao na.......... achcha lag raha hai........ hehehehehe.......

Who is this priyatam? Mera naam to Mahfooz hai......... hehehehehehe..........

a lovely write..the first and last in love written in gold...wonderful

Gold and love make a wonderful pair. And a name is as good as a person. Very nice combination and a wonderful thought with the first and last letters of the Greek alphabet tieing them altogether. Well phrased.

r u in love? ? ? ? ? ? b, coz this feelings may comes only from a heart in love

A lot of imagery and color involving the senses. Well done.

the poet is in deeply love with the person of her affection.truely an emotional poet.. the translation is honest and true to the feelings.

That is the most deepest beautiful poem I have ever read. Thank you!

Kya likhun teri taarif mein Har dil tujhpe fida hai; Tere ishque ki talab mein Sari duniya gumshuda hai. Har juban me tera ye zadubhara kalam, Aie ishque ki shaira tujhe mera salaam.

indleible lines lined with the robes of eternal love

wow! a few lines... a million feelings 10.

anjili chan lihlas me ek composition, Lihnaramahit nahi pan, don line wachhon dakvt Maan maanas umagat nahi, me adhar kasa shodhva, swapanatil padar dhukycha me hatat (hand) kasa dharava.

there at times whn out true feelings can be depicted only through our mother tongue nice work

Honest love always speaks honestly. It has depth, emotion that easily permeats.Beautiful...........10

with so much courtesy shown love will make your passionate heart its eternal abode! love intensly glorified....beautiful composition!