Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Private World Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s the closing time: a late ray
of the weakening sun creeping
though the broken blinds
draws out down the window sill.
...
Read full text

Ajit Das
COMMENTS
Ratnakar Mandlik 25 November 2015

'The incongruity of the private world Trapped in impersonal metropolis, it fights an unequal battle to retain it's own identity, its meaning. Wonderful write. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.10+ points.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success