Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Private Reality- Extended Comments

Rating: 5.0

My private reality,
It keeps me sane,
My viscous abnormality,
Leaves me alone again,
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Bethan Ackerley
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2009

There’s no reason for this animosity, Yet we’re stuck with this mutual enmity, Keeping me innocent, keeping me sane, My private reality leaves me alone again, .beautiful poem to beseen with reality and in fact it is reality extended..i lovd its content and spirit and saw the hellownes in our sysem... keep it up and write more of this nature....10 read mine...sharp shooters... territorial integrity, , , bullet proff..martyrs..

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