Monday, March 19, 2018

Private Dancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch..in silence..as you dance for me
Your movements..fluid..like water around
the slalom of rocks
And you dance...
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Jake Deeds
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Naila Rais 01 May 2018

A great write... Keep it up.... Read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 March 2018

And I am captivated...my senses aroused And you dance... To the rhythms in my head...and the currents of my soul... a very nice descriptive poem of passion.. tony

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Practicing Poetess 19 March 2018

A creative and pretty poem with a surprising twist. Easily a '10' Jake!

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