Friday, July 8, 2016

Pristine Ocean! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unleash your anchored thoughts
Let them drift in the ocean of reality
Let your soul seek the pearls of wisdom
Don't maroon your thoughts in filth
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

Let your soul seek the pearls of wisdom...this is precious dear poetess Aarzoo. An excellent poem. Top score and to my favourites.

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M Asim Nehal 15 July 2016

Inspiring poem, Aarzoo, Brilliant write.100++++

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B.m. Biswas 11 July 2016

awesome...what a thought! diction of this poem seems the elements of the ocean......your thought is here like the waves of the sea water.....really enjoyable. the poem brings a gust of pleasing wind to my mind....refreshing.....10. wish you a happy pen for this kind of creations.....nurul.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 July 2016

Wowwwww. This is beautiful. Words of wisdom told in the most enchanting imagery. Great work Aarzoo.10 with all my heart.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2016

Let your soul seek the pearls of wisdom! ! And live in peace with all mankind. Nice piece of work.

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2016

The self is a feedback mechanism. If you put positive in, positive will come back out. Nicely written, Aarzoo

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2016

Sorry, ph does not accept more than 10. Yours!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2016

Hi Aarzoo, A beautiful poem exuding warmth and positive energy. Unleash your anchored thoughts Let them drift in the ocean of reality Let your soul seek pearls of wisdom Reminds me of Rabindranath Tagore's a famous gita from Gitanjali.. I forgot the exact lines. Shall come back with the poem for you. Great work Aarzoo. I love to 'breath in the vast pristine ocean of existence'! Thank you.

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