Pristine Love...Revised Comments

Pahle pyaar ki maiñ ye nishani liye phirta huñ/ Khoon e jigar meiñ jumbish o khoob ru ki ravaani liye phirta huñ|

Āshiqi sabr-talab aur tamannah betāb/dil ka kya maiñ rang karuñ Khoon-e-jigar hote tak(Ghalib)

No love is as overwhelming and as pristine as the maiden love of a lass I say THESE LINES R HONOURED BYKHAIRUL HASSAN ERROR OVERLOOKED PL GIVE CREDIT TO HIM THANKS

............ALREADY INCLUDED IN YOUR POEM COMMENTS PL SEE THANKS...No love is as overwhelming and as pristine, As the maiden love of a lass, say of your poem makes my eyes recall the first one i loved but cold never touch so much of hull chall dillrehta tha mucchul abh kaya hahein hum

ALREADY INCLUDED IN YOUR POEM COMMENTS PL SEE THANKS...No love is as overwhelming and as pristine, As the maiden love of a lass, say of your poem makes my eyes recall the first one i loved but cold never touch so much of hull chall dillrehta tha mucchul abh kaya hahein hum

sorry I JUST LIKED THE LINES SHALL AMEND OR ADD ON AS SOON AS I GET A HOLD OF THIS NEW VERSION ELSE SHALL REMOVE IT

The first two lines of this poem are the same as those of mine, under the same title. Hoped to find a mention of my name or my poem's, somewhere!

Yes dil rehta tha mucchul... that's kind of feel one has in first love after that it is just fun.beautifully penned the furst love and its indwelling scent and that will never be forgotten. Blessed are those whonreally live with their first love.