Sunday, October 30, 2011

Prisoner To My Pain Comments

Rating: 4.4

never finding an escape
to this past so haunting
the pain felt so deep inside
cuts like shards of broken glass
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(De Va) 02 November 2011

beautiful write, release your soul into the stratosphere and allow that pain to pass into the sky as you lift your wings to fly about the filth of the perp...you are not guilty of anything other than being innocent....hugs n blessings for your beautiful soul....

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Paul Colvin 31 October 2011

Sad, touching and one we can all relate to in parts.

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Unwritten Soul 31 October 2011

Kill your pain and smear the sadness blood away, past...we cant change it, future we will face it...so we dont want feel hurt as past right, move on in any way you can find...because dont hurt for many times after today or tomorrow...at least half of your life need to be better and it's not shame to cry, because it was created to feel such :) Keep strong and your mind is sharper than razor blade.. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Time is the healer of pain, although it cannot erase it completely time and the love of those close to you shall set your spirit free once more... Very touching poem...

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Matthew Petranovich 30 October 2011

Yes, pain does hurt. But it can't keep you a prisoner. It's in your mind. You just have to squeeze through the bars and escape. Some how some way. Great right. mucho love.

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Dave Walker 30 October 2011

A very sad but beautiful poem. A great write.

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