i was a captive of your heart
a prisoner of your love.
like a prisoner i was whipped and beat
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Your poem speaks of trust. You have written out details of reality within a relationship. Trust and the truth come forward and express themselves. Nice organization of thoughts and feelings to create this piece. Well done. DC
How lucky you were to be captured by the right person.She turned out to be your liberator. A deep and delving look at love.
You kind of know from this, that it is where true love can start. If you know that they will hang in there with you through the rough times, there's no place else to go but up. If they stick around through the worst then their really going to love the best. COOL 10++
Great flows of loving verse my friend...you express your love to the highest quality...a beautifully expressed heart of loving ways, and sways
Heh! ! heh! ! This is good. I wish I some one will entrap me in some dungeon filled with love lolss.. Loved this one.. written with lots of emotions..10++ regards Shan