Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Prisoner Of Myself! Comments

Rating: 4.3

for too long
i was a prisoner...
a prisoner of myself!
held captive by desires
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Karen Riggs 18 January 2012

nice work. i can relate to this myself. great piece.

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Miroslava Odalovic 18 January 2012

Mixed feelings are hard to deal with, but at least you made it to superbly capture them. Excellent insight into inconsistency, and an honest one at that.

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Lawrence H 18 January 2012

Good and excellent poem. sometimes, we become our own prisoner...especially in our mind and thoughts...when we become lonely and have nothing to do.

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Madina Morris 17 January 2012

Prisoner Of Myself! ...WOW! i really enjoyed reading this poem, like always :)

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 January 2012

The heart is reluctant to fly; the spirit that was sacrificed to heart demands freedom; love makes its own way. And you are a prisoner of yourself. It seems difficult for this poor mind to comprehend the meaning though I am as old as you are. It is obsecurity, sir!

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