Thursday, February 2, 2017

Prisoner Of Heartland Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the dungeon
Of my heart
I have kept you
Imprisoned.
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Rameeza Nasim
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Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

We imprison our loved ones. Sometimes they don't realise that we are all imprisoned by love.++10

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

It is not mine It is solely your Kingdom! Who imprisoned us? We lost freedom in the ground. Thank you.

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Umair Khan 26 April 2017

A feeling of love exquisitely defined. Marvelous miss malhi

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Rameeza Nasim 26 April 2017

thank you Umair :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2017

Marvellous expression on love and life. I feel the most romantic lines are..... But I won't let you Leave my Kingdom That dungeon of heart was visited by no one ever. Many thanks dear Rameeza, keep the ball rolling.

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Rameeza Nasim 11 March 2017

thank you for appreciation :)

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2017

Absolutely awesome! Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. It's a powerful love poem Rameeza with its economy of words. Kudos and thanks for sharing.

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Rameeza Nasim 20 February 2017

Thank you your comment made my day sir :)

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Siddartha Montik 19 February 2017

In the chains of love, You cry for freedom; .. What a Prison can it be for a Lover! wonderful lines poet! Nicely written with such compassion of Prison :) ! ! loved reading it! ! ! Thank you for sharing! ! - - Siddartha me!

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Rameeza Nasim 20 February 2017

thanks it is my latest poem :)

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Saadat Tahir 06 February 2017

nice light poem with a deeply romantic theme... liked

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Rameeza Nasim 07 February 2017

Thank you

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