Prisoner Of Desires! Comments

A brilliant poem.... well penned dear poetess LeeAnn

…we are fond of our own built cages. Praise God you have uttered these things for He reveals them and provides the escape! As you say it's a cooperative effort…we must fight for the release. Thank you for directing us a step closer to God! !

A great poem dear poetess Aarzoo

The day we break free of our inner-selves Is the day we are a step closer to God....Yes, it's absolutely correct. I most sincerely admire your poetic expression and your style of penning. Top score.

Excellent poem.5 stars.

hum apni khwaashoN k kaidi hain aur apne pinjDay se aashqi kartay hain jis din apni androon chaatoN ko toD date hain Allah k darwaazay pe aa khDay hotay hain

We are the prisoners of our own desires......yeah exactly; right you are....good spiritual writings on this earth this momentary earth (though acknowledged by us) when we become greedy and runner after the nonsense illusion then all our inside light of humane there destroyed by wickedness

Fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful poem elegantly crafted with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

The day we break free of our inner-selves/the day we are a step closer to God-Fascinating lines. A beautiful piece of work..very nicely penned..Congrats!

Hi Aarzoo, A lovely philosophical poem, reflecting the noble teachings of the Vedas. May be Quran should be counted as the fifth Veda, which has taught you so much about the fallacy of living guided by your desires. Once we free ourselves from their clutches, the powerful light of hope and extreme faith remain to guide us ahead the spiritual Way. Great work. Let me quote: The day the furnace of desires is doused Is the day we are free from life's seduction. Loved reading the poem.10+++

You are right Aarzoo, but that day is the day of death. I think God wants us to pass the life in moderation and for that he has asked the men to follow a discipline. Your poem is beautiful and nice.

A r z o o, the great teachings of Lord Buddha, 'Desire is the root cause of sorrow', so nicely penned by you in your mesmeric stanzas.........

A great poem indeed... so true in life...... these are our own problems........ it is ours to recognize its worth and worthlessness. we are prisoners of our own desires... you raise yourself to the level of great spiritual beings with this poem. tony

True words of wisdom, we are indeed prisoners of worldly things. I do wish one day I can let go of my shackles. Great job fellow poet

Your poem focuses desire which is the root-cause of all sorrows.....subtract desire from a human being..it will be God.......splendid presentation...

Bound by the chains of desires, man is a prisoner in this world. Simple true philosophy of iife hidden in every word and line. Marvelously explained. You as usual turn out with the best poem. loved and enjoyed.10++++++++

The day we break free from the love of this world Is the day we come closer to the garden of paradise...............................................So true! The poem is full of meaning and truth.......! BEAUTIFUL thoughts!

Nice poem. You play with words like a piece of cake. Thank you Aorzoo Mehek for sharing this awesome poem.

Very well-conceived and well-worded poem Aarzoo once again. Full of wisdom and beautiful thoughts. Deserves an absolute 10+

so true and such a apt title to the poem! break free from the negative thoughts and worldly worries itself opens the door of achievement. a gud write