Saturday, January 10, 2015

Prisoner In Your Own World Comments

Rating: 4.5

Trapped with no escape,
at the place where I hate.
My self determination is lost,
and my heart right now is colder than Jack Frost.
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David Hockaday
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Kim Barney 10 January 2015

Amen to what Chinedu Dike said below. You can choose your own destiny.

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Chinedu Dike 10 January 2015

You don't have to be trapped with no escape because you are the master of your fate and the captain of your soul, which are the central tenets of the poem INVICTUS. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. I like the articulation and penning of your poem as it captured how you really feel inside. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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