Sunday, July 22, 2007

Prisoner Comments

Rating: 5.0

It would be my joy to break free
Find freedom from these waves of insanity
To break free, be like a bird
A white dove, to soar above the earth
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Shannon Nagel 15 September 2007

I can smell the salty air... I taste true freedom. Your imagery is so strong! Good work..

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beautiful imperfection 30 July 2007

This is an amazing poem! Your descrptive words provide great imagery, I love it!

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Mazey daisey 22 July 2007

wow! ..this is an awesome poem..its definately going into my favorites..its very well written and i felt every word of it..i went somewhere outside myself while i was reading it..im going to read it again now..thanks for sharing

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