Sunday, October 11, 2020

Prison Walls Or Love Freedom Risk Taken Comments

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all great escapes
are mind plans
planning laborious
meticulous details
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Terence George Craddock
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Richard Wlodarski 16 March 2022

In revisiting this poem, I see how amazingly well it is written. Terry, sincere thanks for the dedication.

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Terry Craddock 12 October 2020

Without your poem this poem would not exist, nor would the poem' Civilians Children Die In Modern Wars' inspired by your poem ''The Heart Crying Out'. So I hope you like it also?

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Terry Craddock 12 October 2020

To Richard my friend, your poem was the inspiration, and you are very welcome; the pleasure and joy in writing 'Prison Walls Or Love Freedom Risk Taken' was mine, I might have written with a theme of love and fear being a prison before, but your poem prompted a clarification of the idea which was a joy to write.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 October 2020

Terence, I am humbled and honoured. So happy that my poem had inspired you to write this amazing poem. Much gratitude!

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Terry Craddock 12 November 2020

your most welcome Richard, looks like another might be coming tomorrow, as I work through my present poems to write

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Denis Mair 11 October 2020

A prison escape narrative is a compelling way to talk about daring to love. A love narrative is a compelling way to talk about escaping from self-confinement. Love is the driving force behind our choice of freedom. The wording of this poem is taut and well-crafted.

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