Thursday, December 4, 2008

Prison Of The Mind Comments

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Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
To hear when you shout.
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Angel Smith
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Keith Hendrickson 15 January 2009

another great piece top to bottom. i realy liked the ending. keep up the GREAT work

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brittany 05 December 2008

nice flow very nice i like your vocabulary very nice job!

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foxy babii 04 December 2008

wow that is seriously amazzin i love the way it flows i love the words you use it i unique well done 10 ++++

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Angel Smith

Angel Smith

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