Friday, January 5, 2007

Prison Cell Comments

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Theres an confined jar inside
Under a layer of muscles and mucus
A jar of unspoken words
And unresolved feelings
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Ryan M 05 January 2007

i can kinda visualize this almost. metaphor for somebody holding you back? i like it. keep it up, keep it real.

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