Friday, July 27, 2012

Prison Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well, I'm in this prison, the jail of life,
I'd suffer this way, with no wife.
The warder talks, he's pink, not black,
Talking good, but bitter, no way back!
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Sina Farajzadeh
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 28 July 2012

nicely written. that's perfect and calm some how. i like two beginning lines the most. great one.

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Neela Nath Das 27 July 2012

Pink man is very bad.It's very nice to let your emotion out thru your pen.Loved it.

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