In the sand at the lakeshore
I leave a footprint.
So quickly -and easily- a wave comes
stealing the print from the sand,
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It is so very hard to make our mark and soon after we vanish. It's an encouragement to intaglio something somewhere hard. Thanks-M
Everyone's time here is limited Smoky, but I agree with Lyn - as long as you have left something worthwhile, you will not be forgotten.
A nice imaginative poem wonderfully written. Maybe your foot prints on sand have gone but your poems on print in PH is sure to stay.
Nicely written. Just remember your poems will be your footprints with Poemhunter. So you will not be forgotten. Howzat!
Nicely written. Just remember your poems will be your footprints with Poemhunter. So you will not be forgotten. Howzat!
Though this be true it is hard to accept. Maybe something we say or do will linger. Some of your impactful poetry should be passed on.
A really fantastic poem, we all leave a mark that will stay when we are gone. Really love this. One of your best.
Prints In the Sand, Ah yes! Clever indeed. Thanks for your kind words on 'Smoke from the Chimney'. So easy to relate memories when using poetry as the vehicle. Adeline
We are all just passing through, but maybe our footprints will remain in the cosmic memory. Lovely write Smoky.
Never forgotten Smoky, hope you are now home and dry, a very clever interesting write.
Loved this poem, and I think it is so creatively done! But, you will not be forgotten. I hope the holidays are happy ones and the New Year is another great one for you. {{{hugs}}} and best wishes always~