Princess Of Darkness Comments
The princess of the darkness is ready to marry,
Everyone in the dark world is very happy.
She pointed her teeth and set out to meet.
Lots of dark princes came to see her,
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Idea and theme are very good. But its very narrative just like a prose and essay.try to be more poetic.
As I said before you have the potential to be a great poet and now I see that you can also write stories with a great imagination.Nice idea about the battle between Good ad Evil but in my experience they are both equal.On the line Walk of floury did you mean flowery?
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7/30/2025 7:57:50 AM # 1.0.0
I really like the flow of this poem and I think if I am not wrong that this poem is about vampires or something. Still it was nice reading it as it is creative writing with a good command on the language.