*** (Princess Indian) Slow The Love *** Comments

took me straight to the moment, standing in the middle of the desert as a mirage appears.. very earthy and deep portrayal.10/10

Old mystics words of wisdom/ring in her ears/two birds following against the winds....Wonderful images, Thank you dear Anju.A good poem. I like it.

Last 6 lines are very appealing...wish I cud write like u...keepitttup

lovely imagery in this write...apicture

open eyes dream with sweet and meaningful thought...love it and it makes me think and inspires me to satrt writing soem good one too...well done..your poetry is really heart feeling and soul touching....10 ++++++++++++

Soft as silk, green as pasture and lovely as damsel.10

In dreams one starry night a shatterred heart in pieces, like thunders, had a nightmare of dreams in loves temple where she awaited her love under the open skies wish to kiss words of love

agree with your say... yah believe it thats why you are one of them and sweet committed frind of mine.. talented, kind, fair and claer frien.. respect you and sure your comments will be feeding my soul... yours...afzalshauq@yahoo.com

Wrapped in finest crimson silks, adorned in jewels around her neck in worship for love.. when will that monsoon come for a heart-yearned pitta bird?

all i can is..wow and woow..a very enchanting piece.I love this

in worship for love, wrapped in finest... she will see her prince... anju you place it so wonderfully well... i try to look back my own heart to search some thing.. keep it up.. great works last ever.. wish all best for you dear

Lovely imagery, Anjali. Poetry thay pulls you in to the mind's eye.

you have created a beautiful atmosphere of palace, harem, of princely household, of costume, of the royal touch by beautifully choosing right words for your poem, the beauty of this poem lies in the fact that the reader is transported to a moghul period of aristocracy and prosperity.thanx

An absolutely beautiful poem

hey what to comment in this poem...this is a really outstanding and mind blowing poem....and really hats up to you for your great thoughts and imazination thanks

Anjali How have you got such a beautiful mind which can feel 'a shatterred heart in pieces'? Mushfique

hey nice poem infact touchey poem......wondering if your heart is a broken one the poem tells me that.....if yes mine is a broken one too.....

outstandin imagination does my sis have.it clearly is exemplified here. bravo! ! !

outstandin imagination does my sis have.it clearly is exemplified here. bravo! ! !

Beautiful imagery, a well penned poem Anjali +9