Sunday, January 18, 2009

Princess And The Stranger Comments

Rating: 4.6

Deep,
black eyes
unfamiliar
yet known eyes
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Ata Khan
COMMENTS
@ tumac 03 March 2018

A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman so sensual mmmm

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 18 June 2012

every scene is passing right before our eyes and the story is enjoyed with your good words WOW.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 02 February 2010

lovely romantic poem...the flow is so natural...

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Siddic Nagdee 31 January 2010

It's written with much flair and beauty...nice one

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Fiona Liddle 28 January 2010

I really liked it.. I like the way the words just seem to flow one after the other- a little like the work of Walter de la Mare- and I can't wait to read your other poems

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Emma Kessler 27 January 2010

It's a wonderful poem and it flows very well.

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Akshita Nahar 12 January 2010

the imagery and idea behind it is really nice..

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Ritty Patnaik 23 December 2009

worth reading over and over again this beautiful poem.good flow of words and the last stanza is outstandimg. best wishes......ritty

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'What you whisper is very unique What you see is even rare' Rachel Ann Butler

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Adam Pinheiro 19 September 2009

Wonderfully motional poem, I enjoyed the nice imagery you portrayed. Good job ^^

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Alex Searle 18 September 2009

Very cool. good flow and great diction.

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Aparna Sinha 15 September 2009

I know I was suppose to log off....and here I am...helpless reading this wonderful poem..enchanted...strucked

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Apothecary Montague 12 September 2009

great poem, i love the way you placed words for pausing effect, it has made the poem flow through me, nice flow.

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Carol Tepana 12 September 2009

beautiful just beauty which you have describe from a strangers eyes and the lost princess where they found each by looking through one an others eyes into their souls. Our eyes are windows to our soul it is transparent and reflects outward. Absolutely adore this poem! ! ! ! ! !

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 05 September 2009

Lovely conversation, great use of descriptive language and a good taste of choosing words. Well done

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Passionate Flower 02 September 2009

wow really great poem i feel it so high you have done a wonderful job i love it thanx for share it with us best wishes regards

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Lyla Rattlesnake 31 August 2009

I Admire this poem greatly! you have got a power in your hands i believe so. I really like it :) It is deep.

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Kizza Michael 21 August 2009

this poem has taken my poem emotions....

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deep and emotional poem! ! ! I touched mysterious feelings! ! ! keep it up 10/10

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Danny H 06 July 2009

Beautiful a tear came to my eye, when i read this. how romantic and sweet. never the less you should read it to the one you love.

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