Deep,
black eyes
unfamiliar
yet known eyes
...
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every scene is passing right before our eyes and the story is enjoyed with your good words WOW.
I really liked it.. I like the way the words just seem to flow one after the other- a little like the work of Walter de la Mare- and I can't wait to read your other poems
worth reading over and over again this beautiful poem.good flow of words and the last stanza is outstandimg. best wishes......ritty
'What you whisper is very unique What you see is even rare' Rachel Ann Butler
Wonderfully motional poem, I enjoyed the nice imagery you portrayed. Good job ^^
I know I was suppose to log off....and here I am...helpless reading this wonderful poem..enchanted...strucked
great poem, i love the way you placed words for pausing effect, it has made the poem flow through me, nice flow.
beautiful just beauty which you have describe from a strangers eyes and the lost princess where they found each by looking through one an others eyes into their souls. Our eyes are windows to our soul it is transparent and reflects outward. Absolutely adore this poem! ! ! ! ! !
Lovely conversation, great use of descriptive language and a good taste of choosing words. Well done
wow really great poem i feel it so high you have done a wonderful job i love it thanx for share it with us best wishes regards
I Admire this poem greatly! you have got a power in your hands i believe so. I really like it :) It is deep.
deep and emotional poem! ! ! I touched mysterious feelings! ! ! keep it up 10/10
Beautiful a tear came to my eye, when i read this. how romantic and sweet. never the less you should read it to the one you love.
A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman so sensual mmmm