Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Princess And The Commoner Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Knight was in love with a Princess;
she walked with a dignified grace,
she was arrayed like a perfumed flower
threaded in gossamer lace.
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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

a nice story Captain. your quite a story teller. enjoyed the read.

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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

great story... extremely well done, , , , ,

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Yasmin Khan 29 April 2013

It's a classical love story. True love is like precious pearl can be found anywhere..I liked it's epic theme.

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Shahzia Batool 27 April 2013

Beautiful! ! ! People so frequently discuss that after the Information Technology we have lost the reading habits, but if the writing is like this what you write, the readers still have the aesthetic taste buds alive! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 April 2013

A story so wonderfully told which touches thechordof the heart.The crafting of the poem is beautiful with full rhyme and rhythm.Enjoyed to the hilt!

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Valsa George 24 April 2013

A beautiful ballad that runs like a soft flowing stream! The chivalrous knight, when in desperation over his unrequitted love abandoned his valour and armour and identified himself with a commoner, could at last find a companion of his heart's choice with the magic talisman necklace around her neck, chattering of commoner love and passion! Greatly enjoyed

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