Princess Comments

great rhyming words are appropirate idea is fresh what else is needed now.

cute dedication to an unknown....very effective in nature, as composed by fine imagery, flow of rhythm & rhyme. a poetic art indeed

Very strong Poet! ! ! And well written!

Great poem young friend. Keep it up. Siya_! !

I think this is a special poem if you write to someone, uplifting poem, beautiful and nice imagery accompanied along the lines, very nice effort! _Soul

Wow! A lovely poetry.. Beauty lies in heart.. U Potraid his beauty in wordngs..lykd it a lot!

Brilliant! ! Excellent rhyming too. :)

Nice rhyme, Vishal! Do what you can do.. Never stop writing!