You fell from above as an angel one of the most beautiful of angels you fell as your wings were torn apart and collapsed into your hate.
Above despises, below some worship you, underneath the souls cry to you, the fallen work for you. You are what is beauty on the outside but ugly on the inside with your power of manipulation you can fool anyone but yourself.
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In your poems I find the touch of Biblical expression.Yes, Lucifer i.e the evil power sometimes works in character.But, the apparent angelic feature may fool other.Very nice.The expectation and the non fulfillment, are revealed thru this.
...... Not entirely sure what to say, and I mean that in a good way, the whole thing was amazing. I love the flow of it and the word choices and everything. Plus the subject of it and the deliverance of feelings towards it made it even better, I really really like this!