Primus Inter Pares Comments

I like it. Expertly written.

Sourav, This is a great submission. 'First among equals' is a drive that brings about one's desire to produce a motivation to sustain an 'inner' challenge to succeed among those respected. I had to read this poem several times to 'then' under that 'purpose' I had mentioned to you. This creation you have made provides 'identity' that overwhelmingly defines the purpose. 'PRIMUS INTER PARES' is nice.

A very well written and thought out piece, well done Sourav 10/10 Tom

very nice verses and good selection of words. i really appreciate your truthfulness and your dedication towards your poetry. good luck and welcome to poem hunter.

Beautifully expressed emotions.Liked it.

It was a pleasure to read this very expressive and well written free verse poem, Sourav. It quite effectively held the reader's attention and told an intesting tale very well. That should be the aim of every poem a poet writes, and though you are fairly new to the art of poetry, you are certainly off to a good start. Clearly, you have a gift for expression and imagery, the necessities for becoming a successful poet. Carl.

The novelty in you is clearly seen through your writing.So my advice, keep writing!

Sourav, 10 for your passion in the writing of this poem from the heart. Dorothy

The message you put forth really is worth remembering for a lifetime. Good write

life is always like that, sourav...where from, through whom we get the message is enigmatic...but only few like you can recv the intended message!

dark nights always end up dawning in bright light...just like that thought, as you said, dawned late in you, Sourav...As a new comer to this site your this good poem shows you have enough talent...you can do well by avoiding some unwanted 'caps' there...a ten for you

The expressions have depth and needed punch. Good. I hope yu certainly stand first amongst equals.

This poem was written in distraught times, copied to my diary on a turbulent night..but in the end it always summoned in me enough courage to look ahead and lead my life in my own terms.