Monday, March 2, 2015

Primrose Comments

Rating: 4.5

Primrose climbs the old city wall
March wind drags the winter's tail
Outside the wall is a chilly breathe
Inside the wall someone is soothed
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Cigeng Zhang
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Sekharan Pookkat 27 April 2015

is it may flowers which you mentioned in the poem - smile along with all -nice penning

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Cigeng Zhang 29 April 2015

Beautiful comment dear Sekharan.Thank you for your sharing.

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Daniel Brick 04 March 2015

I'm writing these comments on March 3, so I am really appreciative of a poem set in March. It's amazing how similar our experiences of the seasons are, despite the distance between our two home locations. I can readily transfer the feelings in your poem of March into the landscape I can see from my balcony. I love the name of that flower - prim rose - it's almost as it the flower was shy about appearing, uncertain about how it will be received. But it does appear and gives us a happy, calm feeling. These lines I found especially moving: QUIET, QUIET, DO YOU KNOW SPRING COMES - THE EARTH IS WAITING FOR THE RED BLOOM. I love the calming nature of these lines, because they express something positive that will arrive in a timely fashion and will bless us,

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