Saturday, March 4, 2006

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Rating: 3.5

Well, Max, you wouldn't understand,
a dog is not a human, after all.
I'm in my forties, says my gut
and the chronology, it matters not,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 05 March 2006

Subtle nostalgic sadness, at its most poignant in the final line. Dog year example of chronology well-conveyed. Sobering and engaging writing. Warm regards, admiration of your writing diversity, and a score of 10 from Gina.

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LOVE it! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wit with a message conveyed so it rolls off the toungue.

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